Week 9

 

Today, I again pinned up my book to gain some user testing. This time, I brought in Emma who is a member of my target audience to gain some feedback on what she thought. 

Feedback from Emma 

Could layers of skin be different weights like graduate down 

Loves illustration on her spread should pull through to other spreads

Black head kind of ruins system maybe try outlines on all three

Could functions spell out something 

Line could come through for skincare solutions 

Change paper weight for bottom section

Make map not linear - little icons in the timeline

 

Likes grid of dots - functions of skin could do the same